their name was donkaleena and donleena
their real name was anna and phoenix.
but one day....They...They....THEY had no NO MORE INTERNET or WIFI
donleena---NO MORE WIFI OR INTERNET....NO more ROBLOX NO MORE YOUTUBE DIY's
NO MORE VINES AND DUBS, THEY SCREEEAAAM ALSO THEY couldnt find their phones/tablets/laptops/computer they were sad ;c they spend 14 days depressed because they had no more wifi until they relized that they HAD internet but they laptop and that wasnt connected, When they connected to the wifi it was the best day of their lives the end
their real name was anna and phoenix.
but one day....They...They....THEY had no NO MORE INTERNET or WIFI
donleena---NO MORE WIFI OR INTERNET....NO more ROBLOX NO MORE YOUTUBE DIY's
NO MORE VINES AND DUBS, THEY SCREEEAAAM ALSO THEY couldnt find their phones/tablets/laptops/computer they were sad ;c they spend 14 days depressed because they had no more wifi until they relized that they HAD internet but they laptop and that wasnt connected, When they connected to the wifi it was the best day of their lives the end
That was a good story line. But it looks like you forgot the caps at the start of lines, and it looks like you forgot full stops. But on the other hand if you remembered those things it would have been a very good story.
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holy sheot i did
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Hey Phoenix,we really liked the names and the story-line it was really enjoyable to read. Next time maybe you should add some more describing words and capital letters for the names. -Anna & Kodyak
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